Can't believe this is a work by deManuel .
Of course my art skill is nothing compared to your talent. But as a manga style follower I think I can have some words here. Manga characters often have even more simplified nose, which is sometimes just a lone line. The girl's hair should have more working on it. It seems that the cat has been shrunk too much.
You know Daniel, this artwork would be great if you apply your normal drawing talent here. It seems that you have tried to prevent yourself from playing with colours and adding contrast as you wanted it to look cartoonish. The grass is so bright. The fence looks like bugging out cuz it's so bright and lacks textures. The background, which may be a simple gradient ramp, makes the scene more vulgar. I don't think some clouds really waste that much of time.

Just some words for you as you have asked in your description. Keep up good work .

nice one
good concept and well done especially the gras (wonderful^^ )
just the shadows on her leg could be a little smoother
although i don`t like maga stuff that much

i'm not into manga either but to me this looks like a great piece of art. very bold colors that really get the viewers attention. very well drawn and painted. looks very professional to me, Daniel.

• claudia

ps...mysticcat has some good advice that i have learned from.

really so differnt work from you i am so happy to see it they have a little problems may be ,but at all seems good ...for the manga the hands must be expressive more and i agree about the hair ,make it as she is swinging by the wind and may be the grass would be better with darker shadows but except that i like so much how this is make and congrats you for this work

Yes, definitely is a very different work compare to the others of you, in my opinion the design looks good and the color too.

Creo que hizo falta estilizar un poco más a la chica para que parezca más un dibujo de manga, tal vez los ojos más redondeados y la nariz más pequeña, el cuerpo más largo y el cabello más esponjado y con menos mechones visibles, pero en general tiene la esencia de un comic, el gato es un buen toque que recuerda perfecto al estilo manga.

Buen trabajo.

I think it looks great

Beautiful colors!....good work Daniel!
Carlos

Amazing work!!
Que no dibujas buen manga?? Anda ya!! A otro con eso, está muy bueno!!!

Top marks for you, It's good to see diversity

Thanks to all for the comments and critiques.

very nice ...

how cute^^

Hi Daniel! Cool and diferent work
I like it! nice characters, nice colors, nice composition

Excellent work, always good to see something different from you.

+10

The shadows on her hair look a bit 'dirty'.
There's quite a lot of grey in the image, I'd suggest using another background colour for the sign.
She's quite a foxy one, though.

Looks like a very good and professional drawing!
It's not the kind of stuff I'm used from you, but this is also a very good work
Well done Daniel!

Hmm this is pretty different from your other works, but this seems more anime than manga. Anime usually has more simple character designs and easy structured bodies ( for the sake of animating it ) and manga tends to have more complex line art and usually very detailed and elegant ( imo, of course it varies) The hand looks a little weird to me, the pinky seems as big as the index finger. But overall i think you got the right feeling of an anime/manga piece. I really like that bag.

Yes, it is different, but I still like it.

I like the last one very much.
Top Mark

pues para "no saber" dibujar manga no está nada mal ... a lo mejor los ojos necesitan esos brillos que les dan a los anime... pero yo los prefiero como los has hecho tú. La mochila está genial, yo también he hecho mis intentos con el manga pero no han quedado tan bien como esto Muy bueno +10

love the colours and lighting in this . You should do more of this style as you seem to do well with it

Me gusta! q pena q no ganó.
Este es el q hice yo hace dos años ficomic.com/ORIGINAL/salonmanga2005/img/cartel_2005.jpg

I love the colours.. The painting is really summery and warm. Good job fella!

great work amigo ! new style, but I like it ! +10

erdi

...and Manga loves you!

Muy buen trabajo, esos colores tienen mucha energía!

it looks very nice, i like the illumination and details.
me gusta mucho quiza el tono de la piel no mucho pero en fin, me agrada tambien el efecto de brillo en el casco del personaje. +10/10

nice manga-toon... +10 very cute...

I find this work great! Top marks.

I find it more a work of patience more than talent. It shows that if you try hard you can get something out of it.
keep digging.
stay away from manga